| 2012-06-16 09:23:36 |
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Could i ask that people comment on what they like/dislike about the story so that i can improve on my future stories and make them more enjoyable for everyone :) |
| 2012-06-16 12:59:44 |
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Thanks for the comments guys :) |
| 2012-06-16 13:23:03 |
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I understand that alot of stories like this do involve Harry and Hermione, but if you read my next part to the story you'll see that nothing continues between them. I just wanted to add a concept of them cheating on their partners as it wasnt some thing i have read in other harry potter related stories |
| 2012-06-16 20:41:40 |
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Don't worry i have no intention of adding gay sex |
| 2012-06-17 19:20:07 |
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Hey, yeah sorry i do try to read everything over before posting it but its hard to notice everything :) i'll take extra care in future |