| 2012-08-17 12:44:19 |
Stephanie's First Lesbian Adventure
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This got me super-wet. Very well-written, just a couple spelling errors / typos that detracted from the story. It's very sexy and what's really special is how plausible it seems. Maybe I'm a little biased as a bisexual woman who has not yet experienced relations with a female, but it captures my fantasy beautifully. I think you did especially well with the transitions from the introduction to the card-playing in the kitchen to the undressing and pussy-licking in the bedroom. Having Mason stay out of the action and watch was a good choice. Overall, a very good read! |