| 2012-10-03 19:10:12 |
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You don't have to defend your story it was great and anyone who can't see that didn't read it well enough. I loved this chapter you gave Joey a real depth of emotion and character this time. I love that he wouldn't cheat on his girlfriend. It made me cry for them as they wanted so much to be together but they both knew they couldn't really be yet. I don't think there's anything wrong with the fact that he wasn't publicly mastrubating or humping furniture as the other poster suggested. Joey is a grown man now and most men grow out of those things when they get older. Or at least I hope they do. I thought it was very real. I'm dying to see how this ends please don't make us wait that long. Please don't. I love this story. |