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Comments from Barbusie
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-09-12 17:08:24 | Passions of Innocents | This is my first story and my first attempt to get it posted I was so worried about the time limit that I did manage to miss a few mistakes during editing. I have since corrected them and if you like this I'll repost the corrected chapter 1 when I finish and post chapter 2.. Any and all constuctive comments will be helpfull... Thanks for giving it a read . I hope you like it.... ... Barbusie ... |
| 2012-09-20 08:15:37 | Passions of Innocents, Chapter 3 ( Momma Spills The Beans ) | Annonymous Reader: 2012-09-19 / 09:22.. All constuctive comments are VERY welcome. I'm sorry to have waisted YOUR time, however I am VERY new to this, I'm semi-retired and have a shit-load of stories that I've writen over the years and have finally found a web site to publish on and obtain hints and tips to maybe get good enough to earn a little money on the side. I feel it's better then sitting around IDLE and scratching my nuts till the day I die. also I've had to learn how to negotiate this web site which at first was kinda baffeling. But I'm getting better at it, and although there may a few mistake here and there I feel that an old fart like isn't doing too bad with out a 'Doctorates in Litterateur' from one those pretentious ivy leage mind control estsablishments...... I thank you for YOUR support... ... Barbusie ... |
| 2014-06-22 13:34:04 | How it started with my older sister | I think it's about time for another Noah type flood.... |
| 2014-01-01 10:55:47 | brook the neighbors lil girl | If you want to write, you are going to have to study the English language.. It would also help to have a Webster's Dictionary handy or use the dictionary in Microsoft's Word/ Word perfect.. If you don't already have one installed on your computer, you might want to install a copy of Microsoft's Works program.. This will give you a lot of the tools you can use while writing.. After you have Installed the Works program, I strongly suggest you practice,(a lot) .. Writing a good story is a lot like playing a piano or keyboard and playing well enough as to not chase away the 'cat'... Everybody has to start sometime.. Another suggestion is If you can afford it try attending creative writing courses at you local community collage.. Good Luck. ... Barbusie.... |
| 2015-05-22 06:04:42 | Laura, a.k.a. ( The Little Nympho )_(1) | I had a lot of fun writing this and the others in the series... It's a fact based fiction about my teenaged years.. Some of the story is true though names and places were changed for obvious reasons.. It is mostly true though.. There was a little hotty who I nicknamed "Little Nympho" I did marry her out of high school, and we did have a real wild bohemian life style going for a few years and actually had a lot of fun while we were at it.. But I have to admit, I just couldn't keep up with her.. And , if I had a bit more enterprise in me at that time, I would have moved her to southern California and would have gotten her into doing PORN professionally.. She would have been real good at doing that...... ~ Barbusie ~ |