| 2013-01-19 02:16:06 |
Babisitting Alex
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Really good story and well laid out. You have talent, keep writing. |
| 2013-01-19 02:22:58 |
Babisitting Alex
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Really good story and well laid out. You have talent, keep writing. |
| 2013-06-30 17:43:32 |
Your Name Here_(1)
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Thanks for the feedback! I will start working on the next chapter. Expect it sometime next week! |
| 2013-07-15 02:16:04 |
Your Name Here: Chapter 2
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Sorry about the confusion in the first paragraph. That was meant to be a description of Wesley. And I will work on making the stories longer. Any other comments or criticisms are welcome! |
| 2013-09-07 09:11:53 |
4 Best Friends ~ Part 1 ~ Nathan's Plan
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It was a really good start. Keep going! Ignore all those comments |