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Comments from Shel99
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-04-08 18:04:21 | The Terrible Ts | Calm down. I am simply writing a story, a rough draft. You don't even know the characters yet. There was no reason for your kind of backlash. This was my first story and I wanted to get better at my writing. The story may imply rape and torture, but is far from it. Remember this is a rough draft. Although, after reading this message, I'm not so sure if I want to continue. I would like constructive criticism, so if anyone reads this, please drop a message. Thank you. |
| 2013-04-13 00:09:06 | The Terrible Ts - Revised | Thank you to the most two recent reader's comment whoever you are. I agree with your statement. If it is the woman's fantasy and she wants it to happen, then fine. If it's not, then the rapist should get what's coming at him (or her :S). And yes, read further. Or don't read at all, since all you're going to do is be rude and try to sell your opinions to others. |
| 2013-04-13 06:52:36 | The Terrible Ts - Revised | This is a story. It's not real! I just wrote what to mind. Leave it at that. And if you really read the story, there were hints that the girl wanted this. I submitted it again because I added more stuff to the story (not by much, but enough to change it up a bit). There will be another part to the story (and I don't know how parts there will be). Sorry for the confusion. |
| 2013-04-23 01:46:02 | The Terrible Ts - Revised | Dear A: You didn't misread anything. I purposely left the sizes of their dicks. The story comes in several parts so things will be introduced gradually. Whereas other stories go right into the facts (if that makes sense), I like to take my time and build up the story. The brothers are triplets, not twins. And yes, they are 18. If I made a mistake or was unclear in some parts of the story, I apologize for that. Also, part 2 is up. But I'm not very happy with the end result, so there may be a revised/reedit version of it coming out soon. Thanks for reading and commenting. :) ~~Shel99 |
| 2013-08-12 02:30:34 | The Terrible Ts – Part 2 (Revised) | You know what? Screw you. Unlike you, I have a life. If you can't deal, make your own site where you can do all that and get off this one. |