| 2012-10-02 00:12:15 |
Secrets of an Elder Sister and Kid Brother - Chapter 1 - Sister's Helping Hand
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this was a good story, didnt reviele to much, open for the next part, and always detailed, the only thing u could do to make it better is the grammar, it was a bit hard for me to read it, im an exalent reader and for the average reader it would be confusing, i rate it 8 otta 10 beacause u didnt reveile everything at once u left it open to draw the readers attention nicley done |
| 2012-10-02 00:29:15 |
Secrets of an Elder Sister and her Little Kid Brother - Chapter - 2 - Between Sister?s Legs!
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again great detail, the grammer was better, and the ending was great, left me hangin i hope u post num 3 lookin forward to it 9 outta 10 |
| 2012-10-02 00:29:16 |
Secrets of an Elder Sister and her Little Kid Brother - Chapter - 2 - Between Sister?s Legs!
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again great detail, the grammer was better, and the ending was great, left me hangin i hope u post num 3 lookin forward to it 9 outta 10 |
| 2012-10-03 23:34:08 |
Farmer's Daughter - Part 1 & 2
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good details, great plot line, i dont do rape stories often, but this seemed more of a dad punishing his little girl than a rape, with inseast and a possable beastiality scene in it .... lookin forward to the next story for the first time ever in a rape story series..... dont dissapoint me |