| 2012-10-09 04:59:01 |
little sister and me
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enjoyed the story. Don't give up on writing...learn as you go. Practice makes perfect and a good Enlish book helps. |
| 2012-10-09 05:14:56 |
Mommy Tries To Resist
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Enjoyed, but you should priof read better. Would be nice to have some the exrotia foreplay and more discriptive details of settings. Keep the work and write more. |
| 2012-10-09 05:35:20 |
While Parents Are Away The Kids Will Play
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Excellent, my imagination is on fire. Hope you will continue. |
| 2012-10-15 03:54:01 |
Chooks Mum
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I enjoyed the story. |