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Comments from browser58
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-12-29 14:32:42 | A new day, a new me | Good start, but you need better formatting for readability. Smaller paragraphs and blank line between paragraphs at a minimum. |
| 2013-04-21 13:21:34 | A new day, a new me part 1 | RE: Reformated chapter 1. Looks good, thanks for your work. |
| 2013-06-12 14:19:34 | Summer Vacation part 2 | Good work, keep it coming. |
| 2015-06-05 19:03:38 | D and D Dreams Even Nerds Need Love | Great story - could have used a bit more character development. |