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Comments from iBoy
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-10-27 22:36:36 | The Trouble with Tess 1 | Very well scrpited, realistic storyline, although a bit too far on the verge of perverted for me to buy it at a bookstore. Rating:¥¥¥ |
| 2012-10-29 16:48:55 | Sister Seduction: Part 1 | Thank you everyone for the the advice, I didn't know spacing would be such a problem and I will make sure to space, indent and write Part 2's paragraphs better. As for the other sister, she won't be participating fully- she doesn't have sex with her brother untill Part 3- because she is only 8-years old. I am grateful for the advice, however I ask that in the future, please, if you're unhappy with a certain aspect of this, or future texts, be civil and explain you're problem. Calling someone's work "bullshit" is not really a good way for you to express yourself. |