| 2013-01-04 14:48:35 |
Shelly loves preteen lobotomy
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I won't waste my time commenting on this story. |
| 2013-01-04 14:49:09 |
Shelly loves preteen lobotomy
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I won't waste my time commenting on this story. |
| 2013-01-05 22:03:14 |
Hunter & Prey
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I loved thew story. I'm looking forward to the continuation. |
| 2013-01-31 15:10:22 |
Modern Mage - Chapter 9
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Other that your proof reading skills need help, my only other suggestion is that you stop trying to explain yourself. This is your story (like it, or lump it), so stop apologizing for it. It is what it is and will survive (or not) on its own merits. |
| 2014-08-24 04:34:21 |
Being More Social - Chapter 2
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Great work. I love the character development and look forward to reading more. |