| 2014-01-07 10:20:45 |
A Change Of Mind
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Very good writing. I must admit, I was a little turned off by the age but I can honestly say, it helped the sex scene tremendously. Great job. Hope you get to use a better word program next time. I've struggled with wordpad too. |
| 2019-12-15 06:12:25 |
Carole's Story 01 - Growing Up
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Now that you're married, is she faithful or is she still being used by her brothers and bosses? |
| 2019-12-15 06:57:50 |
Carole's Story 07 – The New Boss
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Carole sounds like a genuinely sweet girl, but man, she is getting abused something awful. |
| 2020-02-24 04:46:58 |
Breedr: The Casual Breeding App -- Harper
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Love it. Hope there's more. |
| 2020-07-07 06:02:51 |
Artificial Affection Ch3
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I love this story so much. I kind of want him to marry Monet. She just seems really cool, but I think it'd be hot if he married his cousin. I'd like to see where that story would go. Great work! |