| 2013-06-18 12:53:39 |
Touch - Chapter 1
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This was a really good story, I liked the build up and the descriptions of the people themselves. I can't wait for the next story. All I've gotta say is well done. |
| 2013-06-19 10:50:33 |
Touch - Chapter 2
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I'm itching for more, I like the story line and the intensity of each moment. I can't wait to read more. It's been a while since I enjoyed a story this much. So pleas continue, I can't wait to see what happens. |
| 2013-07-10 21:43:18 |
Touch - Chapter 4
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So far so good, although I gotta say the move on Robin was stupid yet enlightening. I really enjoyed the story and it's getting interesting. Keep it up, you have real talent, just work on the grammar. |