| 2013-03-22 06:25:16 | My Photogenic Mom   Chapter 3 | Sorry but rape is not good. Fiction non fiction,  or phantasy.  A potentially good story is ruined with a central character  with NO REDEEMING QUALITYS. Shame that. It could of been a good storey | 
			
			| 2013-03-25 18:34:33 |  | Ditto to all the others | 
			
			| 2013-03-25 10:41:22 |  | Well those two characters well and truly deserve each other. Good story shame about the bitch and the wimp | 
			
			| 2013-04-21 08:51:33 | Finding my way back home, Parts 3 and 4 of 6 | This is a really good story.  You need to publish the next installment ASAP. This is a story that is good with or without porn. Well written, thoughtful and thought provoking,  with real,  believe able characters. WELL DONE | 
			
			| 2013-05-10 06:25:13 | My amazing life Chapter 6 | It's been 1&1/2 months since you're last storey. And that's a shame,  they  were good storeys,  come on where's the next ones.  If there aren't any more at least tell everyone |