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Comments from Casshernsins
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-06-14 11:37:04 | Weird things, Succubus. | ok so as this is my first posted story here and still learning as i go as all can see i'm not that a great a writer but hopefully good enough people like it anyway. I have other ideas to expand this story and well I might continue it if people like it or I might move on trying some thing else story wise. |
| 2013-06-14 18:47:31 | Weird things, Succubus. | from the mistakes that are pick i learn from them hopefully be better next time round i go back over this. |
| 2013-06-16 08:31:26 | Weird things, Succubus. | Ok I have gone back over this story hopefully I caught some of the mistakes. I have altered some of it as some of the ides did not work as well as I came up with. It not to drastic a change now I hope the changes help the story. On words and upwards on improving. |
| 2013-06-16 08:37:16 | Weird things, Succubus. | Not sure how long it take to get a reply about the editing a posted story so just keep your eyes peeled for revamp. I'm working on next part so i take my time learn lesson from first part, all reading will be up some time during the coming week. |
| 2013-06-20 20:22:11 | Weird Tales, Succubus. Part 1. | As I have said edited it hope it read better that my first attempt. |