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Comments from Explorer_Fant
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-07-23 16:33:55 | Crossing the Forest | How about to finish the story? |
| 2013-07-24 01:28:27 | Crossing the Forest | Is it about the content or about style of writing? |
| 2013-07-24 01:28:35 | Crossing the Forest | Is it about the content or about style of writing? |
| 2013-07-24 02:00:59 | Crossing the Forest (midle part) | Please, write what you likes here and what did not. |
| 2013-07-26 06:13:29 | Crossing the Forest | Thank you for your comments. It tels me that story is hard to read. And most of readers not able to get semantic component of story. I`m planning to remake the syntax after finishing the story. So, if there is somebody who interested by idea of pretty women having extreme adventures in night forest. Please, join me to edit the story. For people who just tholing: non-constructive criticism just makes your own life quality to decrease. You may know it as the karma. P.S.: I`ll submit whole story a little bit later. |