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Comments from Michael_Darkness
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-01-15 00:28:36 | A New Day, A New Us part 11 | The first 90% of this story was GREAT, believe it or not; Even the "Natsuko was the cause of all of this" scene was BRILLIANT, I thought. I wouldn't mind seeing that issue addressed in the 4th story. The last 10%, though, was THOROUGHLY anticlimactic, in my opinion, and that's something I've not yet seen in any endgame so far in this series. I'd even go so far as to recommend a ending change. It's THAT much of a let-down. That aside, this was a fantastic story. Thanks a lot, and I'm looking forward to Story 4. Positive vote, btw. |