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Comments from MitchCumstein309
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-07-10 19:53:58 | Strip Poker With My Buddies' Girlfriends | Thanks. Re-reading I see some mistakes, missing key words, and places where there could have been some key improvement. Some better description would have actually made it sound more authentic, such as how truly sore and spent I was after half the night (I make it sound like I wasn't.) I'm never happy with the stories. I go back and re-write, re-edit, and I'm never satisfied. I think they're too long and descriptive and don't get down to the action quick enough. However, when it comes to real stories, it's hard to skip that descriptive back-story. As for turning it into a series, that's a good idea I might follow up on (thanks.) |
| 2014-07-22 01:34:04 | April and Nicky get wet | Awesome stuff! I love sniffing panties while a woman wears them or eating pussy through the panties. I like the face sitting. This story was spot on and I could totally relate. I love how the girls get off on him sniffing and go with it. |
| 2014-11-18 23:06:06 | Fuck In The Arms of My Young Horny Son | Very hot. I like the part about the pantyhose and panties turning him on. |
| 2014-12-22 19:37:22 | Taking Girlfriend's Sister | Great short story. I love a good rape story where the girl gets off and the guy loads her fertile pussy with sperm. I had a girlfriend for a short time that got off on role playing rape. The more forceful I was, the harder she came. |
| 2014-07-11 20:12:43 | Sex With My Younger First Cousin | I didn't know 7 inches was considered too big. I've measured and it's 6 3/4 fully erect. It's also on the thick as opposed to thin side, My first girlfriend used to complain that it was painful when I'd bottom out in her which isn't physically possible but I was hitting something. I was merely trying to capture her reaction. She is very small and petite, and she was young so it seemed big to her no matter what (even a small one would probably have.) Anyway, the negative criticism is well noted and I'll refrain from embellishing as it clearly ruins the story. As for proofreading, I did proofread and run spell check a couple of times. I'm just that bad at spelling and grammar but I'll work on improving that too. |