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Comments from Venatorus
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-05-09 20:28:42 | Titcage (Chapter 34) | Glad you're back in action. Keep it up. |
| 2014-06-16 05:37:05 | TXR-92U-2280 – Call Name: Sara – Part 1 | This is exactly the kind of story I have been looking for! |
| 2014-02-02 02:23:12 | The Hunter | Very erotic. I would however recommend you separate paragraphs with more space and use an indicator such as a * to denote changes in perspective. The philosophy underlying the prose at the beginning and end is atrocious, but again splendidly erotic. |
| 2014-02-06 01:04:45 | Titcage (Chapter 5 and Chapter 6) | '‘Whore. Slut. Fucktoy. Pissdrinker. Rapetoy. Slut. Slut. Bitch. Whore.’ And then: ‘Claire.’ And the shock.' This is an excellent end to a chapter. |