| 2015-01-18 19:03:56 |
Revenge pt 2 - The plot thickens._(1)
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I'm impressed with the quality fo this writing. Really impressed. This is definitely a series I'll be reflecting back on for the rest of my life as it contains everything that makes one hell of an erotic tale memorable. Nothing is better than a ton of sexual tension. It just makes the sex that much more intense. You managed to juxtaposition two incredibly powerful emotions together as they often to appear in real life. I cannot wait to read the rest. |
| 2015-01-19 00:41:57 |
Revenge, Pt 15: The Decision_(0)
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Awesom awesome awesome. I haven't been blown away by a story like this in... ages. Considering how much literature I've read, that's says something. Definitely in the top 5 of character development. This isn't easy, trust me. |
| 2015-05-07 01:25:33 |
Two Boys and their Dad (Part 3)
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Good job for a first-timer. I would have combined all three into just one parter. But that judgment call comes with experience. |
| 2018-07-11 12:31:13 |
Camp Slut Rides Again
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Even though this was well-written, I was very disappointed it had nothing to do with the original series. I really enjoyed that series and it is still in my top ten favs. Oh well... |