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Comments from oldnerd
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2014-12-14 15:05:37 | Aunt Lynn | Thank you That was my intention in writing it. I'm glad to see there are some who appreciate this writing style. |
2014-12-19 00:17:22 | TV "service" man ( Rewritten and re-edited) | I did proof it 4 times. English was never my strong point in school. I studied electronics.... However, I will work on it., Thank You for the honest comments. |
2014-05-02 18:41:36 | My Girlfriend is a Prostitute | Need to proofread this. It has osme typos and spelling errors. As far as the story, as what was said above, if this is what you want: A fuck buddy, then you must be happy. If a real relationship is what is desired, run, boy, run |
2014-12-20 14:07:19 | TV "service" man ( Rewritten and re-edited) | Points well taken Look's like I have a lot of work to do. Smaller lead-in, quit depending on spell check, and go find my old english books from night school college. |
2017-11-19 19:37:43 | PICTURES of LILY | This is one of the best stories I have read here in a long time. Wish I wrote that well. How about a sequel where Mary takes over for her mother. |