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Comments from DarrenDaly
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2014-04-23 01:09:36 | Morning Glory | Anonymous reader! Should have answered this first really. This was written in 2011, when I started writing this for a laugh. It's not intelligent or well-paced, but hopefully it is hot. Senses are important, and I thank you for that comment. The one thing I disagree on is exaggeration. To me, this art is just a verbal form of porn. Everything in porn is exaggerated - big dicks, big tits, big everything! I'm a newbie to this, and when I find more differences between the visual and verbal forms, this will likely change and become more personal. As I said before, I'm not really going for realism, just hot scenes. Again, maturity of a writer will probably change this. Thanks again, and keep commenting, Darren Daly |
| 2014-04-23 01:04:02 | Daly Delights | Dear Anonymous Reader, Many thanks for your comments, and I know that with practice, my writing will get better. The two stories were actually written 3 years apart, this is the more recent, and I decided to post them together. For me, erotic fiction is about the sex itself, and side details are more embellishments than key details. The hospital thing is basically just an excuse to write a sexy nurse - she wants to fuck him, what's she going to care about the x-ray process?! I do appreciate your ideas, but I'm very keen that it's light hearted more than anything. My sex writing needs improvement, and that's the focus now. Does he really need a CT scan in the story? No. Just get to the sex. Please do come back to what I write next. I do like to get feedback. Darren Daly |