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Comments from Jeymar42
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-04-22 02:08:29 | The Ordinary Housewife | So well written. I could see the actions taking place as if I was watching a movie. You have great talent. |
| 2016-04-22 02:39:26 | The Ordinary Housewife | So well written. I could see the actions taking place as if I was watching a movie. You have great talent. |
| 2016-04-24 05:00:30 | A Boy and His Powers | I gave up reading. Some people will never learn about formatting text. The author is responsible for making it easy to follow the trend. I don't give a damn if the story was plagiarized. The least you could do is improve it by proofreading it and using paragraphs. So for me, this gets a negative rating. |
| 2016-05-07 04:09:16 | Matt: The Hypnotist_(3) | Great story. Of course there's place for improvement, but none the less, you did very well for a first timer, better than some established and long time writers on this site. If you need an extra editore to help you out, give me a sign and I'll gladly review your text with you. I don't like to brag, but I'm usually good at detecting the small mistakes that might escape others. I really enjoyed reading you and look forward to seeing you continue with it. It could develop into many more parts and establish you amongs the best here. Keep up the good work. |
| 2016-05-07 04:11:38 | Matt: The Hypnotist_(3) | I pressed the return key too fast and missed one of my own mistake in my review: (editore should read editor). Sorry. |