| 2014-08-17 10:03:56 |
The Best Therapy ch. 07
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The mother should be the first girl he fucks and I hope he does. The mother is the most deserving of the 3 girls. |
| 2014-07-16 21:58:43 |
Videogames with Mom
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Great story just a few grammical and spelling errors. If you plan on writing more stories you should find somebody to proof read your texts. But I really hope there's a second part to this. And look forward to mord from you. |
| 2014-08-27 22:36:43 |
My teacher kept me for a reason...
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Good story overall. Just gottah make it a little more lengthy and have some more details. And have somebody proof read it for grammical and spelling errors. But I loved the story and am looking forward to more from you. |