| 2015-01-08 13:00:42 |
A New Day, A New You part 5
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Awesome chapter! Stu seems like he is ready to help Guy with any job asked of him. Also I am glad he took care of his business with natsuko. I am wondering if Richard will become another Derek and also want to see Stu get true revenge on Stephanie. |
| 2016-01-30 16:27:35 |
A New Day, The Other Me chapter 2
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First thing first, screw all the trolls and haters out there. I have followed and liked all the original Guy story. I laugh when Guy or someone in his team gets to knock someone down a peg. That being said I have to read this series when I am alone. I am feeling more how Guy feels and that is awesome. I don't know how but you have improved as an author in great strides. |
| 2018-01-25 05:55:40 |
The new neighbors_(0)
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Great first time story. The quotation marks are top of the fix list. Then it is a couple of grammar errors. There are plenty of us here willing to proofread. Just ask and you can get help. |
| 2018-04-06 14:40:15 |
A New Day, The Other Me chapter 14
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I had almost given up hope. I am glad you were able to finish the story. The only thing I still wish for is to see what Guy, the man does with his life. |