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Comments from MoonlitIncubus
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-08-28 05:08:26 | The Good, The Bad and the Molly - Chapter Two | Again, awesome as ever, Bashful. I'll be following the story. Moonlit Incubus |
| 2017-04-22 12:51:35 | My first time with cousin Camelia | Dear lord, I hate Victorian era writing. The wording is so formal and weird, like they're forcing themselves to say everything politely or what. Nobody uses actual terms, and they all sound like some flowery poet who is always grasping for a new work. All pomp and circumstance, no respect. That being said, your story was actually somewhat bearable. Bar the horrid sperm metaphors, and the ridiculous comparison of the cousin to a whore, it's rather well done. But I do agree with anon. You should definitely look for a little more 18th and 19th century writings, even if it's from the smut books in the restricted section of the library. |
| 2017-04-22 08:42:52 | Camping with the Johnsons PT1 | Good read, feels slightly rushed. Also, try to stay historically accurate. Phones in 1998 didn't have 3.5mm jacks, much less the space for "a long playlist of music". You might do better changing the year to so.ething more recent, to fit the story. Other than that, its a wonderful story, but it could be better. And it deserves a part two. |
| 2017-04-22 12:40:18 | Emma's first time_(0) | Nicely done. A little over the top with the black cocks though. |
| 2018-05-26 07:30:49 | The Unspoken Game - Part 3 | I have to say, that was pretty damn good. To be honest, I think I preferred the first half of the trilogy, before the dad got involved. But overall, it was a pretty decent piece of work. Good job . |