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Comments from AveryTomDeaconHarry
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2009-03-01 09:35:55 | "To be continued…." huh. So where is the next part, where he actually takes her cherry? |
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| 2009-03-02 16:10:51 | Jennifer’s Sexual Awakening - Ch1 -Close Encounter | Fyi. I know pot is not tobacco , pillock. I don't say it is (which you would realise if you had read the story properly). She had a pot-box which contained the tobacco... and GEAR (another name for pot). |
| 2009-03-10 21:41:48 | A Boy In Babeland Chapter 3 | Great story (10/10), but you need to learn a bit about correct punctuation (5/10) as the glaring errors do put a slight damper on it (even though there aren't many of them). |
| 2009-03-09 18:14:09 | peeping tom_(4) | Good story, but even though it was written as truth, I have rewritten it (and added a lot to it). I hope you don't object. |
| 2009-03-10 14:03:16 | jonny joke... not having a crack at christians | Great joke. Shame you crucified it though. |