| 2009-08-17 13:16:21 |
Majic Kingdom
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I certainly hope there is more to cum (pun intended) ... that story was sooooo HOT ! I can't wait to read more. Try to clean up your spelling tho it was a little distracting. Even so ... a very HOT story indeed. |
| 2009-08-17 13:31:23 |
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Great story ... I can only hope there will be more chapters ... some mutual blow jobs would be great as well as fucking each other too. Keep up the GREAT work. |
| 2009-08-20 11:37:23 |
my surprising step daughter
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I would LOVE to read more of your story. Please continue to write more. How old is the girl anyways ? Pre-teen or teenager ? |
| 2009-08-22 11:26:19 |
His Boy
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Even tho that was a short story ... it was very HOT too. Please write more like that but with alot more detail too. ;) :) |
| 2009-08-22 11:36:21 |
Boys at Play
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Hot story ... I hope there are more chapters to cum. (pun intended) |