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Comments from The Mentor
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-04-20 03:00:06 | First time with Christian girlfriend- part 2 | Poor syntax and missing words and letters! Otherwise a pretty hot story !! |
| 2016-04-19 16:13:59 | A Mother's Mistake.....Maybe! | Smokin hot story for sure it where's the rest of the story please write more !! The Mentor |
| 2016-04-18 13:40:26 | First incest experience with my mother - Part 2 | Very very poor syntax and spelling distracting from the story immensely!! The Mentor |
| 2016-04-18 05:24:47 | Robbie & Eve - I’m right here if you want me | A very well-written story leaving us wanting more we hope that you will continue on with the story and how your life turned out !! The Mentor |
| 2016-03-31 12:44:17 | Hot tub Fun_(1) | Smoking hot story but you need to improve your syntax there were some missing words here and there but otherwise really hot keep on writing |