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Comments from 190proof190
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-05-23 21:32:51 | A new day, a new me part 1 | For me this story scored high on the key attribute of being entertaining. From a literary critic view which I really am not the story had brought in a conflict early, escalated the conflict to a climax, a climax, and finally resolution. I had to read it a second time to be aware of the grammar issues some mentioned. My suggestion to them is that if they want to improve their grammar skills, go get a text book. |
| 2016-12-08 10:36:05 | A Farm House Story: Part 1 of 4: A Love Tryst | Parts 2 & 3 of this series have some pretty brutal scenes so it a graphic description of people getting murdered or killed in self defense you might want to now read those parts. Part 4 is the final part of this series. There are no brutal scenes but a good number of romance and erotic scenes. Thank you for taking the time to read this story. |
| 2016-06-09 09:01:50 | Prom Night_(1) | I hope to read more of your more stories. |
| 2016-08-28 10:57:59 | Jack and Emma An incest love story | This was the first time I read this story and I really liked it. Creating a story like this takes time and effort. I am not going to read through the comments made by others to see if I agree with them or not. My suggestion to them is for them to create a story and submit it for others to read. |
| 2016-07-26 14:23:22 | Hard Trouble Sleeping_(1) | Very enjoyable read. Thanks. |