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Comments from Yo Black Master
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-02-02 18:36:28 | My Daughter new bathing suite | Overall the story is good. It could use detail to make it longer and paint a better picture. This biggest issue though is editing. You need to re-read your work, there are too many spelling and grammar errors. You have a good writing style, just work on refining it. |
| 2019-02-05 02:13:22 | 21st Birthday party | Good story. Would have liked it to be longer with more details. |