| 2017-12-22 01:40:00 |
Sam 1
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Good story, the flow is a little rough here and there, but good sci-fi. Please continue. |
| 2018-02-19 01:43:56 |
The DReAMers part 3
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I hope you're working on part four. Very well done, well developed plot and lead character. |
| 2019-04-27 04:32:23 |
The Way it is Now CH4
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Nice job. You really convey the feelings in the situation. I don't "get" Sarah yet, I hope you keep going. |
| 2019-07-06 05:25:16 |
Alice_(1)
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A lovely, well-constructed story. |
| 2019-07-14 04:55:11 |
Lizzie and the After School Club
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I like your style. Characters are believeable, story lines well developed. You inspire me to develop a story idea that I've been mulling over. BTW, you know when (and how) to wrap up a story. This one doesn't need a sequel - not that you shouldn't continue if you have a good idea in mind! |