| 2017-06-08 06:10:53 |
My 14th Birthday Gift
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I'll agree with those two. Doesn't seem true... Wish I could take your word for it, but... :[ Try harder next time. And be glad I still rated you positive. Could've been a prick. But, nah, you just need corrective criticism. I'm not dissing your story entirely. I'm just saying you should change the way you present your work. That is all. If you wish for your story to be well-recieved, try being honest off-the-bat and use spell check frequently. I'm being rude. I hope you understand. Have a nice day. 510 might read again |