| 2018-06-20 19:27:54 |
Wrestling with my sister_(1)
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I enjoyed the story, but there are grammatical mistakes that detract from the readers enjoyment. My brother does beta reading and editing on a different site. I have not previously, but would be willing to in the future if you continue writing. |
| 2018-06-20 19:35:51 |
Wrestling with my sister_(1)
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I enjoyed the story, but there are grammatical mistakes that detract from the readers enjoyment. My brother does beta reading and editing on a different site. I have not previously, but would be willing to in the future if you continue writing. |
| 2018-06-20 19:35:54 |
Wrestling with my sister_(1)
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I enjoyed the story, but there are grammatical mistakes that detract from the readers enjoyment. My brother does beta reading and editing on a different site. I have not previously, but would be willing to in the future if you continue writing. |
| 2018-07-15 10:30:10 |
Cherry (chapter 8)
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NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE, SHIVERS, THAT ENDING GAVE ME SHIVERS. FR tho great story dawg I enjoyed it. |