| 2017-05-04 03:02:08 |
California Adventure with Blonde Angel
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Please I beg that you create a second chapter. This story is amazing. Give us more. And if you do end up posting a second chapter, can you tell us how he ended up in a wheel chair. I hope you make a second. Great story 10/10 |
| 2017-01-20 00:19:45 |
Alyssa
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This is actually amazing. Can't wait for the next. In the mean time, I'm gonna read the Julie one. Haven't read that one yet. |
| 2017-01-19 03:33:25 |
A Happy End to High School; Part 4
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Great story as usual. I think you should kind of just slowly push traci out of the story, she seems like that one skimpy character that doesn't mean anything to the story. I also think that you should add in another clothed photo shoot with Lily and Josh, adding that the "model guy" liked her pics and she wants Josh to do these photo shoots for her and she would then give him rewards. But you should make the "reward" something different. Anyways that's just my opinion. Also another opinion/question. Please do not add anything sexual with the mother. It ruins the story. No mother and son sex scenes please. |
| 2017-01-24 23:24:04 |
A Happy End to High School; Part 4
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I'm getting annoyed. It says that your 5th story was posted at 5:53 p.m today, and it's not showing up. |
| 2017-01-25 23:35:52 |
Obama/Trump: Political Erotica Part 2
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I think it's fucking hilarious how he put true story. And the party where Obama fuckn pissed on Trump and the tan peel came off. |