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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-03-09 18:46:30 | Hinata's love for Naruto Part. 2 | Well looks like someone already pointed out the “74 palms!” mistake that I was going to point out. But also at one part it said Hinata looked into her blue eyes. It should be "his" not "her". But beside those 2 mistakes not a bad story. :) |
| 2017-02-22 16:05:47 | Naruto: Slave for You Ch. 2 | You really need an editor. Too many errors and spelling mistake. |
| 2017-02-22 19:45:09 | X-Change Short Stories. | The only thing I don't like about these Xchange pills is the pregnancy shit. They need to have a type that makes it so you can never get pregnant. Both for temporary and permanent versions. There really needs to be a lot more of these kind of stories and a "gender bender" tag for stories like these. I have a ton of ideas for these kind of stories, but I'm not much of a writer. Maybe someone looking for ideas for a gender bender/Xchange story could use one of my ideas. |
| 2017-02-23 05:25:15 | The extraordinary tale of asuhina hikari | Yes we need more tentacle monster stories like this. Girls is so lucky. I wish I could be a girl like her can enter that cave. ;) |