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Comments from soopi
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-27 04:57:08 | Alanna | Too brief in the intro. Needs fleshing out and a better ending. Has potential though. |
| 2018-07-27 07:18:14 | The Mosquito Burrow | Keep writing. This certainly has possibilities, like Daniel's comment. Make the story a little more plausible and you will have a winner. |
| 2018-07-27 09:46:29 | The Unexpected_(0) | Keep at it..great story xx |
| 2018-08-12 11:07:54 | The conference_(1) | Great. Got verrry wet. I agree with others; you should/could write just about women. Very sexy stuff |
| 2018-08-12 23:34:09 | Contact | There has to be more. It feels like a great beginning of a series. I hope you consider this. Story has wonderful potential and is very original.....Thanks for posting it. |