| 2019-10-21 04:08:38 |
Naughty Amanda_(1)
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Luke. not my idea of sexy having the horse cum involved. |
| 2019-10-26 05:35:47 |
Eve and James, a loving relationship
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You were doing OK until the 10 inch dick. Stop the lying and build in more paragraphs. |
| 2019-10-26 16:58:53 |
The Medallion - Chapter 3
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You need a lead up to this. Who is she? Why is she at uncle's house, etc. It's like joining a cruise in the middle of the ocean. Well written otherwise. |
| 2019-10-26 16:59:39 |
The Medallion - Chapter 3
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Sorry, I just noticed this was chapter 3. I will go back and read the others. |
| 2019-10-27 03:56:09 |
Sweet revenge and maybe a bit more (S1)
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Part two please. |