| 2017-05-18 10:43:14 |
RUNNING into TROUBLE
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This should have a part two. |
| 2017-05-18 13:07:52 |
Katie - Our long forbidden romance (edited)
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Good story. |
| 2017-06-20 08:17:09 |
Paying My Rent (Revised)
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There should be a sequel. Like it's her story. She gets the itch and turns out her and her roommate are actually lovers. But Hollie is wanting her brothers dick again and turns out she's pregnant with his kid. And maybe throw in her roommate for a hit threesome |
| 2017-06-29 21:22:38 |
Fucking My Sister's Best Friend
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The sister joinin in would be great |
| 2017-06-29 08:34:50 |
THE SURFER DUDE and the SOCCER MOM
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Hey dude. I like your stories they're sexy and hot as hell. But you end them so suddenly. Like with running into trouble. You should make a sequel. You just ended it where most stories would pick up on. He got both the mom and daughter pregnant. What about afterwards? Like what happens to them? That's somethin you really need to look into. And this one. I was rootin for him and Gina to get together. Not for him to fuck her friend. You don't put a lot of efforts in your endings. That's just constructive criticism. |