| 2018-08-08 13:30:06 |
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I have read hundreds of stories, and all of the stories that both Mel and Mojavejoe have written. This is by far the best story I have ever read! It is a fantastic love story, with depth and passion, and gut wrenching drama. Very very believable. It is so well written that you can easily identify with both Jenna and Connor. You can feel their happiness, pain, and love for each other. Completely developed background and side stories. This is truly an outstanding story by two of the very best writers in erotic prose! |
| 2018-08-08 13:30:12 |
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I have read hundreds of stories, and all of the stories that both Mel and Mojavejoe have written. This is by far the best story I have ever read! It is a fantastic love story, with depth and passion, and gut wrenching drama. Very very believable. It is so well written that you can easily identify with both Jenna and Connor. You can feel their happiness, pain, and love for each other. Completely developed background and side stories. This is truly an outstanding story by two of the very best writers in erotic prose! |
| 2018-11-13 18:18:15 |
The Dog Days of Summer_(0)
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Wow! This is an outstanding story! Your writing, as always, is nothing less than superb. You can feel all the emotions you bring into play as you describe Sal and your feelings for him. The detailed sexual interactions between you and him is amazing.Wonderfully done Mel! |
| 2018-11-15 23:09:09 |
The Dog Days of Summer_(1)
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Wow! This is an outstanding story! Your writing, as always, is nothing less than superb. You can feel all the emotions you bring into play as you describe Sal and your feelings for him. The detailed sexual interactions between you and him is amazing. I have read several stories in this genre but you have added a whole new aspect, you weave a very strong sense of the Dominant / submissive theme. Sal is not just your dog, or a sexual object, he is your Dominant lover and your feelings as a submissive to him are very apparent. Wonderfully done Mel! |
| 2019-02-05 16:34:44 |
Duke Has His Day!
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Wow! Jim what a fantastic story. It has it all, hard sex, dog sex, girl - girl sex. BDSM, D/s Dominatrix/submissive, and video... Not only is it superbly written and well developed, I could feel the love between the two of you. It is an incredible feeling... |