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Comments from Mercurial Fantasties

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Date Story title Comment
2018-03-29 03:42:03 Blackmailing Morgan I really enjoyed this. There were a few punctual mistakes, like lack of commas, but other than that, I loved it.
2018-04-08 08:48:30 Wendy's Story (edited) I loved this, honestly. I need to see if there’s more of this. If not, I really need more. Because this was great.
2018-06-13 02:05:48 The Move_(0) More more more! Gimme gimme
2018-06-13 03:28:48 Reunion_(0) Wasn’t as long as I had hoped. If you’re gonna make a continuation, make it longer. Much, much longer than this. I need a good, long read. This went by really quickly, and escalated very quickly. I suggest moving at a slower pace, bring in more story, more details, with less spelling and grammatical errors. Don’t make it too slow, but slow enough. For example, describing the characters more; describing where they live—what the town looked like (at a quick pace, just a few details), what their location looks like, etc. More deions, more story, move slower, and make it longer. Those are my suggestions and I hope the next one can keep me hooked for a long read. Keep it up my doggie.
2018-06-13 19:39:22 Sister Wants A Baby- Round 2 These are great. I’d love a continuation, and make it longer if you do continue it. I wanna know more of what happens. Make the story finally end at a satisfying spot.
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