| 2018-09-28 07:53:05 |
Their Own World Ch. 03
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YES! Everything you said is exactly what I'm thinking. Chapter 4 is almost done and they actually have a conversation about all of their kinks. It's basically going to be one big sex scene, foreshadowing things to come. I plan to do things slowly, as Katie loses her virginity in Chapter 6. I'm not sure a threesome is right for them, but chapter 4 will also introduce other characters and their sex. Katie won't be getting pregnant for years. As for their family, it's going to be a mixed reaction. In my opinion of erotica, if there's no conflict in the relationship, there must be conflict outside the relationship. Like the conflict of becoming a camgirl & doing shows with your brother, while concealing your identities. That's where this is going in my head. |
| 2018-09-30 17:58:34 |
Potential Part 26
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Bistander, not surprised I'm not the first to say, you've also inspired myself to begin writing erotica. It's personally pretty cool to be in the top 30 with you at the same time. Keep it up. Potential is one of the most interesting, sex-filled, and exciting erotic stories I've ever read. And I've read all the chapters multiple times. |
| 2018-11-07 10:27:00 |
Newfound Lake
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So I guess that report button does nothing. Ignore the guy below me trying to compensate. Comment on the story! |
| 2019-04-02 03:26:26 |
Newfound Lake
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Your comment is basically what I'm doing with everything I write in the future. A few things in the works now. Thank you for the feedback. |
| 2019-09-11 22:55:14 |
Newfound Lake
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I appreciate the feedback greatly! hopefully what I have planned for the future will be ads well-liked as this has been |