| 2012-12-01 09:41:35 |
Deseray's Day_(9)
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Why are you wasting time posting this garbage and using space on the server. You should be prohibited from posting EVER |
| 2012-12-01 09:50:23 |
2 Sisters One Cross-Breed Brother
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I like the concept but you need some more character development and a further expiation as to the what and how of cross breeds. The story seems very disjointed and quickly written. Take your time, it does not have to be a quickie story. Assuming you have the talent for writing this idea could be expanded into a very interesting story. Thank you for posting this first story. |
| 2012-12-02 08:26:52 |
You First
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I really enjoyed this story. I would like to see another chapter. This story was not wild and beyond reality and that kind of different from a lot of stories on this site. Thank you |
| 2014-05-16 05:22:39 |
Sister Helped Me
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Part 2 would be greatly appreciated. The first part was a great beginning and I am looking forward to your next chapter. Thank you |
| 2014-05-16 05:24:54 |
Sister Helped Me
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I sat on the balcony at the hotel and watched people swimming in the swimming pool below. When I finished the story I went back into my room a had my wife give me a blowjob until I came down her throat. |