| 2020-12-02 21:31:24 |
little girl down the street chapter 1_(0)
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damn that was a poor story! |
| 2020-12-02 21:32:10 |
little girl down the street chapter 1_(0)
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Glad you didn't write any more |
| 2020-12-02 22:49:23 |
SEX FORMULA 69
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To rushed and confusing - I couldn't relax into the story |
| 2020-12-03 17:17:39 |
Fun Camping with Two Young Women
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Great story and very erotic - just remember your characters' names :) |
| 2020-12-03 21:09:22 |
The Kindergarden Blues
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Great writing! I was a kindergarden assistant, but the teachers were all old women :( |