| 2018-10-18 07:58:47 |
Harry Potter Promise NR.2
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Hi! I'm over 50, an avid reader, and have really enjoyed your 4 (5th) year story as well as this one. Yes there are some grammar and 2 spelling errors. I catch them as was an editor/reader for an online "book store" that closed when the owner became sick with cancer. But they do not detract from the story. Keep up the good work and ignore the fools and idiots. |
| 2018-10-20 12:50:31 |
Harry Potter Promise NR.12
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Hello, again. Hope you continue the series. Not critical, but the fact Dumbledore was in the hospital, so long. It seems that Harry should have used the sword on the Locket near end last year. Just as using House Elves room of requirement to help find info and Horcruc's should have been brought up on why not work. |
| 2018-10-23 11:04:32 |
Harry Potter and the Order of the Sex Appeal Chapter 4
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I think this is a great story line, please continue! |
| 2018-10-25 00:24:07 |
Harry Potter and the Sexual Storm Chapter 1: The Beginning_(1)
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If you have more of this on another site, please tell me. I think its a great story line. |
| 2018-10-25 00:38:31 |
Harry Potter and the Dark Princess: part 01 ( Rewritten)
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This is an excellent story line, so far. Please continue or if already on another site, say so to me. |