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Comments from bravebombadier
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-08-08 21:49:23 | It started at the beach | Great story, only spoiled because you don't break your sentences up, there-by making it very difficult to read. If you google 'punctuation checker'. you will find a load of sites that will check your story for free, spelling, punctuation and grammar, Give it a go. |
| 2018-08-30 19:51:22 | The Lesbian Debt- All Chapters | A cleverly written story, the characters are well built, but I found myself getting bored about halfway through, so I didn't finish the story, I think it was probably better in separate chapters. Still give it a five though. |
| 2018-10-28 20:43:00 | Kelly's Awakening - Part Four (final) | A lovely series that got better along the way, the final part, whilst being predictable, was the best. Well done. |