| 2018-08-27 16:43:23 |
Amy's Fantasy
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Great writing! I've posted a couple of stories with less that stellar positive votes. Any suggestions to improve my writing? |
| 2018-09-01 14:32:42 |
You like your surprise_(1)
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Great 1st half. Needs more detail about when you get home. |
| 2018-09-17 02:39:36 |
Out of the Closet
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Great story. Is there another chapter? |
| 2018-09-17 02:39:45 |
Out of the Closet
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Great story. Is there another chapter? |
| 2018-10-12 16:11:10 |
Golf Trip with Friends, Day 2
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Another great story! I wrote a couple of similar ones that you may want to check out. Keep writing! |