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Comments from Silverhand
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-03-06 13:54:39 | should I get married? | you need an editor - some silly typos - saw Mary as Marry for instance Generally promising but no real focus in the story just a list of events - maybe develop the various bits Don't take this as a knockback rather it is meant as an encouragement as to where you might develop a little |
| 2020-04-30 16:52:28 | Skeletons in my Closet part c | Loving this story - readable and credible |
| 2020-08-01 18:32:08 | Becoming a bitch - Chapter 2 | hmmm Butch in Chapter 1 and Brute in Chapter 2? Good story though - keep going |
| 2020-08-03 00:42:49 | HOBO Chapter 16 | Read your first two stories a long while back and enjoyed them. However n my humble opinion this is better than either. I also read of your health issues - good luck with that and keep writing you have a talent |
| 2020-09-17 22:33:18 | HOBO 19 & 20 ( The End) | sad to see the end of an absorbing story If you have lost a wife, husband, partner you know the special type of pain described so eloquently here. You also understand the sense of giving up. People who experience that kind of loss to a bad illness be it Cancer or Heart Disease or similar do get tired indeed some just become afraid! Losing one partner to illness is tragic imagine the pain of losing a second one! That is the fear that makes you afraid that is why you just give up For anyone reading who has experienced it and doesnt know.. Go get Counselling - it may not fix you but it sure wont hurt you Thank you Rhiannon another excellent story Please keep them coming |