| 2019-12-12 11:31:32 |
Budding Temptations pt. I
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I like the story so far really looking forward to the next chapter(s). It was well hrittenkeep up the good work. |
| 2020-04-16 15:34:20 |
The Girl in the Yellow Swimsuit
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A very well written story looking forward to seeing what chapter 2 Holds ? |
| 2020-04-28 20:52:26 |
Mama's Replacement
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This was a very nice story keep them coming please |
| 2020-05-05 18:30:05 |
Curious Siblings (Part 1)
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I thought it was a pretty good story. The only thing I wish was that the brother and sister would use their names rather than “yeah bro, yeah sis”. I realize that you are probably trying to appeal to a larger audience but you use the names would make the people reading it ,feel a little bit more invested in the main characters. Keep up the good work I’m looking forward to seeing chapter 2. |
| 2020-05-11 16:46:51 |
Repopulation
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That was a great story. Keep them coming I can hardly wait to see what the next adventure for those two are. |