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Comments from Thepost
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2018-10-05 00:06:06 | Back to Salome_(0) | Nice job you two. Fantastic! Great love story! |
2018-10-05 17:27:02 | The Secret Cheerleader Vote - #6 | Very disappointed. Was good but not as GOOD as the other ones.... |
2018-10-06 14:24:04 | Online Slave Market (fixed) | Nice plot and all but I think it would be even better if you use proper punctuation. Lot's of misspelled words through out the passage. No real character development. |
2018-10-06 23:31:32 | The Secret Cheerleader Vote - #8_(2) | What I mean is your story needs a little more drama... |
2018-10-09 23:05:26 | Sister's plan.._(0) | Great plot but it needs a whole lot more character development. Plus, it feels a little too short.. |